In Loving Memory

A song in my heart...
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In Loving Memory

Post by shrimpy8818 » Thu Jul 20, 2006 7:29 pm

In loving memory of my Aunt Alice.
I wrote this poem in 8th grade.



GoodBye

I sat and watched the clouds go by
and wondered if you'd live or die.
I didn't know what to do or say,
write a card or visit today.
I didn't have time to give a goodbye
and because I loved you I will cry.
I know you're watching from above,
on the right of God's pure, white dove.
So with this poem I say goodbye.
I'll see you later in the sky.

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Post by Willow » Fri Jul 21, 2006 5:29 am

Very nice, I find that writing my thoughts is very comforting after losing a relative.
Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind.
Dr. Seuss (1904 - 1991)

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Post by Crazy Healer Lady » Fri Jul 21, 2006 10:02 am

That is very sweet :hug:
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Health and happiness to you!

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Post by shrimpy8818 » Fri Jul 21, 2006 4:11 pm

aw thanx. I had put it on some poetry sites too, but on those sites people just criticized it. (Poetry to me comes from the heart and that was how it flowed out of my heart)

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