Ok, here's the "poem" (if you could call it that) I made.... It was after a very... influential... event.... hope you enjoy it and if not, i'm not afraid of critisism.
I am fire
I am love, I am hate
I am fire
I am passion, I am vengeance
I am fire
I am lust, I am desire
I am fire
I am strength, I am will
I am fire
I am the spark, I am uncontrolled
I am fire
Hope you enjoyed it... comments are welcome!
A poem I made
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A poem I made
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Re: A poem I made
Sounds like a prayer, to invoke the essence of one's inner fire... kudos, it's good!
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Re: A poem I made
Wow, that's cool. It reminded me of my fire riddle. Nice work.
And in case anyone cares:
And in case anyone cares:
I leap.
I twist.
I turn.
I run.
I laugh.
I sigh.
I die.
What am I?
You say "Witch" like it's a bad thing!
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I have to I like it a lot! But my taste runs a little more the romantic side, I hope you like it.
The game of love it is said
hold a hand and warm the head
and if it be to a lovers bed
or sit and wait for the next word said
In a tender and an infinite sigh
and catching of a wanting eye
to have or hold a simmering gaze
and wander through loves sweet maze
In a tangled webb of truthful lies
or a look so soft in anothers eyes
will have your heart flying on high
and bring you to heavens blissful side
And though you try to understand
the love you feel in your two hands
the doubt in mind can bring sweet tears
but truth at end removes all fears
And in the end when you can dare
to trust your eyes and heart and ears
and in the others burning heart
it is from then you find you will never part!

The game of love it is said
hold a hand and warm the head
and if it be to a lovers bed
or sit and wait for the next word said
In a tender and an infinite sigh
and catching of a wanting eye
to have or hold a simmering gaze
and wander through loves sweet maze
In a tangled webb of truthful lies
or a look so soft in anothers eyes
will have your heart flying on high
and bring you to heavens blissful side
And though you try to understand
the love you feel in your two hands
the doubt in mind can bring sweet tears
but truth at end removes all fears
And in the end when you can dare
to trust your eyes and heart and ears
and in the others burning heart
it is from then you find you will never part!

I was looking for my soul mate and behold I found the other half of my soul!
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Re: A poem I made
Thank you Underlilith and Eugeneli I love reading poetry from the emotions x
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